Tourtellotte Memorial High School

 

English Department

 

 

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Department Members

Richard Keefe

Kristi Durocher

Donna Shaw

Daniel Ten Eyck

Tracy Williams

 

 

Tourtellotte Memorial High School

School Wide Writing Rubric

 

5 Exemplary

4 Adept

3 Satisfactory

2 Needs Improvement

1 Not Yet

 

Purpose

The thesis statement is clear and concise

The thesis statement is clear, but not polished

The thesis statement is correctly placed

The thesis statement is unclear or weak

The thesis statement is irrelevant or missing

 

 

 

 

Topic Development

Number or quality of details/evidence shows deep understanding of the content and strongly supports the thesis

 

Details reveal an overall understanding of the topic and support the thesis

 

Details support the thesis and show some understanding of the topic

 

Details are not adequate in number and/or quality to prove the thesis

 

 

Details do not support the thesis

 

 

 

 

 

Organization

Logically ordered introduction, topic sentences, supporting details, and conclusions with clear transitions showing evidence of careful planning

 

 

Logically ordered introduction, topic sentences based on thesis, supporting details, and conclusions

 

 

Introduction, topic sentences and conclusion are linked directly to thesis

 

 

 

 

One or more topic sentences not based on thesis

 

Introduction and/or conclusion poorly written

 

 

Lack of organization apparent in introduction/conclusion and topic sentences are not linked to thesis

 

 

Language/Style

Fluent and interesting to read

 

Sophisticated vocabulary specific to the topic

Communicates main ideas clearly

 

Proficient use of vocabulary specific to topic

 

Communicates main ideas adequately

 

Correct use of basic vocabulary specific to topic

 

Confusing at times

 

Faulty use of key terms

Choppiness and lack of clarity interfere with reader’s comprehension

 

Misuse or nonuse of vocabulary specific to the topic

 

 

Standard English Conventions

Excellent command of punctuation, spelling, and grammar (fewer than 3 errors per page)

Good command of punctuation, spelling, and grammar (fewer than 5 errors per page)

Adequate command of punctuation, spelling, and grammar (fewer than 8 errors per page)

Poor command of punctuation, spelling, and grammar (fewer than 10 errors per page)

 

Number of errors compromises reader’s comprehension

 

 

 Here are some helpful links:

 

TMHS ENGLISH MANUAL

 

For answers to questions dealing with grammar and usage go to

The Elements of Style 

 

For help in writing try OWL from Purdue University

 

For help with bibliographies and work-cited pages

try Easybib.com or OPEN Clearinghouse

 

 

To prevent accidental plagiarism go to Turnitin.com

 

To view the NCTE (National Council of Teachers of English) standards

 

 

 

 

 Suggestions for Additional Reading:

 

Whale Talk by Chris Crutcher

Tuesdays with Morrie by Mitch Albom

The Secret Life of Bees by Sue Monk Kidd

After the First Death by Robert Cormier

I’ll Plant You a Lilac Tree by Laura Hillman

This Boy’s Life by Tobias Wolff

The Red Badge of Courage by Stephen Crane

Kindred by Octavia E Butler

Bleachers by John Grisham

perks of being a wallflower by Stephen Chbosky

Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro

The Oedipus Trilogy by Sophocles

An Enemy of the People by Henrik Ibsen